This backstory was well executed and had me at the edge of my seat. Whole read I was trying to guess who the guy was gonna be. Great work. This is quickly becoming one of my addiction reads each week.
Ooh chile! At first, she hardly mentioned why she married Hakeem and what she discovered from her fast in agreeing to say yes to him. The ending really took shape at the end, wondering was she ever present in her marriage. Well played!
His presence isn’t really felt in this part of the storyline but it ties in the end since she’s distracted. I don’t really feeling why she was ever connected to him.
Ahhh I got you. I’ll look into that and work on that for sure. I think you’re going to catch something in the next chapter lol. So yeah I have to fix that. Perhaps there will be some focus in him in the next chapter.
This backstory was well executed and had me at the edge of my seat. Whole read I was trying to guess who the guy was gonna be. Great work. This is quickly becoming one of my addiction reads each week.
Ooh chile! At first, she hardly mentioned why she married Hakeem and what she discovered from her fast in agreeing to say yes to him. The ending really took shape at the end, wondering was she ever present in her marriage. Well played!
Thank you for your comment my love! I’m curious, what do you mean? Can you clarify?
His presence isn’t really felt in this part of the storyline but it ties in the end since she’s distracted. I don’t really feeling why she was ever connected to him.
Ahhh I got you. I’ll look into that and work on that for sure. I think you’re going to catch something in the next chapter lol. So yeah I have to fix that. Perhaps there will be some focus in him in the next chapter.